Jesse Laurie — Award Winning Screenwriter
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Premium Assessment 
​– Strengths/AFI's/Solutions
A$1500.00

4+ Pages of Targeted Notes + Scene Notes + 90 Minute Call/Meeting
(Scripts 120+ pages incur a higher fee)

Detailed analysis of your feature or pilot screenplay, outlining the conventions that are working effectively and the aspects that have an opportunity for further development. Key target areas will include the performance of your script's dramatic premise, character journey, plot, story world, use of genre, demonstration of theme, and overall emotional impact.

Solutions and alternatives will be included within the feedback to aid future drafts and ideas, as well as specific scene notes to target. This service includes a 90-minute digital conversation to clarify the feedback whilst further exploring creative ideas and solutions that reflect the story you want to write.

*The feedback will always target the emotional journey of the characters and audience as a priority.
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Testimonials
"This is my second time using Jesse's coverage service and it's yet again been super helpful! I really like how Jesse is able to find key areas to work on and then provide the reasons as to why these are important to focus on. I also appreciate how honest the feedback is and it's refreshing to receive a response that is straight to the point but is always justified. I feel like I'm getting feedback and learning more about writing all at the same time!! Totally recommend Jesse's services and will definitely be back."
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